Motherland Or Murderland Poem by Motunrayo Yusuf

Motherland Or Murderland

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Motherland or Murderland

After all the trials and fights against invaders
After the triumph against selfish disguised traders
To win a war by unity
Only to be ruined into a state of plurality.

My ancestral home
Blessed with the richest of milk and honey
Yet generations die of starvation daily

My origin
A land without natural disaster
But we suffer more havoc than a Tsunami

'The labour of our Heroes past'
Have long been in vain
We now stand divided and fall in unity

I start to wonder
Should you really be called 'Motherland '? , I ponder
When your citizens hide behind a silly cause
And slay themselves, then put it on silly curse

With misinterpretations of scriptures
We have been driven out of sanity
Into a world that care less about humanity

I'm a little curious
Who do we call upon when we say
'Arise o compatriots'?
Are they the one's slit by their throat?
Or the one's who slit them by the throat?

Dear motherland
What will be left of you?
When we can barely survive
From all these war and thrive
Who will see us through?


Written by: #Mo'

Saturday, August 27, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: narrative
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Authors note: The poem presents a setting of an African country - Nigeria, that was colonized by the British. After so many trials and later their independence was granted, only for the war to just begin. The war amongst themselves, killing themselves for a 'silly curse'. The poem ends with rhetorical questions of what must be ringing in the minds of the citizens.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Laurie Van Der Hart 12 January 2017

An excellent poem, Motunrayo. You've conveyed these sad truths hbestly by means of very effective paradoxes such as, we now stand divided and fall in unity. And a land without natural disaster but we suffer more havoc than a tsunami. I would venture to say that there is a people in Nigeria, united despite their diversity, who really have true love.

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Chinedu Dike 11 January 2017

Beautiful depiction of an ugly reality that is Nigeria, elegantly brought forth in good poetic diction with conviction. An insightful poem indeed. Thanks for sharing.

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Motunrayo Yusuf 27 August 2016

Thanks so much for appreciating my works.

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Dr Antony Theodore 27 August 2016

My origin A land without natural disaster But we suffer more havoc than a Tsunami......very painful experiences in one's own motherland........... all are tired of war and occupation........ civil war, hatred........ a reality that we all hear about now a days....... thank you dear poet.

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Edward Kofi Louis 27 August 2016

Problems! ! Living in my ancestral home. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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