Moonlight Sonata Poem by Marieta Maglas
Moonlight Sonata
The cold winter can not destroy the miraculous invincible seeds.
The germination fundamentally changes them in the earth's maternity.
It is a new life running time when the cold snow irreversible recedes,
And a new spring embraces the deep mysteries of magical fertility.
When the seeds germinate, they always throw out a few anchor roots.
Those splintered cracks of deep roots trying to hide inside the soils.
The tall trees need deep roots and branches to bloom and to bear fruit,
While the whole land receives and nurtures the life it essentially contains.
When the divine spark leaps from the divine hand to the human hand,
Making the human roots so deep as they can face the stormy time,
Moreover, taking an ultimate shape in the law of the very green land,
While life becomes a moonlight sonata, life is always sublime.
© Marieta.Maglas 2010
Mari - Angel - This is so so beautiful - it flows like the opening bars of Beethoven's Moonlight Sonata - my favorite classical piece. V 1 New life - new Spring - the Earth's maternity - magical fertility - PERFECT DESCRIPTERS. V 2. Seeds - God's masterpieces wrought in DNA - germinating - roots penetrating - land nurturing - LOVELY IMAGES. V 3 What is the effect of spring on us Mari? A reawakening - Divine hand to human hand - regenerating our roots - making our lives a MOONLIGHT SONATA - Every blessing Mari - in your life and in your love. Thank you for sharing - thank you for caring. Love you in Poetry - JOHN
a beautiful poem bringing out the mystery in life and grace of divinity.the last para is stunningly true. 'When the divine spark leaps from the divine hand to the human hand, Making the human roots so deep as they can face the stormy time, Moreover, taking an ultimate shape in the law of the very green land, While life becomes a moonlight sonata, life which is always sublime' voted10 surya.
Very nice choice of wordings, nicely written and beautiful poetry, keep writing more.
Beautiful look at life from seeds to growth with the haunting title...many times I view the forests panarama at breakfast as my wife plays that great classic on a baby grand which fits your last line perfectly mmmmm...regards
‘The germination fundamentally changes them in the earth's maternity’ May I add ‘Maternity Manifestation’ thro’ Divine Will… what you Manifested by Divine Magic…Excellent poem… 10//10 Ms. Nivedita UK
'While life becomes a moonlight sonata, life which is always sublime.' Yes, you have passed poet. Very tension was there after looking at the caption. And wonderfully you have recreated MOONLIGHT SONATA.. Actually it is LIFE which always sublime in creation and compel the poet or artist to creat another new in own stream. Another illusion to illustrate the truth of life which is sublime. Thank you and with regards Apoet Bangla
'White life becomes a moonlight sonata'...for this sublime phrase, you have my 10/10. Warmest regards, Sandra
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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most expressive write by completion....., yet i do appreci