Moon Poem by yoonoos peerbocus

Moon

Rating: 4.8


Mere amorphous dust in permanent suspension,
in mid-air, nearest to earth and the earth
of your soul MAN, I'm an emissary of some
higher order.What's left of daylight, at night
I turn down the borrowed light through
the darkness of night sky, low to cosmic bliss

as a torch for the benighted and as an
enlightenment of the sky.Though cratered by
imperfection, but free from sun's heat and rain's
coldness, I retain my splendour when visible
and attraction when unseen.Though ever still,
I keep my constancy under all my phases as one

and many.Beyond sorrow or joy as a bridge
builder between nature and man, I keep the ocean
under my sway, periodic menstruation, the surge
of lunacy and the storm-sunshine cycle.Clinging
to my debris I whirl in the dance of eternal
balance.

Sunday, May 31, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: blank verse
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kostas Lagos 31 May 2020

Always enjoying reading your poems Yoonoos! 10!

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Soran M. H 31 May 2020

and many. Beyond sorrow or joy as a bridge builder between nature and man

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Soran M. H 31 May 2020

The poets often wrote about the moon, but they use it sometimes as a symbol and sometimes as a physical reality, but this excellent poetry has mixed the psychological and material aspect of man and nature, really you are writing new poems differently. congratulation 10/10

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Bernard F. Asuncion 31 May 2020

A well penned poem. Simply awesome....10+++

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Ellen Ni Bheachain 31 May 2020

Enjoy reading your poem " Moon" nice way of saying how it works and reflects on us here on planet Earth.

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Tom Allport 18 July 2020

A wonderful write of our close relation in flight......well penned

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 10 July 2020

Another excellent write Very encompassing and wonderful description of this wonder of nature; moon. Its mysteries, beauty and wonders have been painted brilliantly on the canvas of this marvelous poem. Another poetic gem, Sir Yoonoos. To my Poem List.

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M Asim Nehal 05 July 2020

First of all, thanks for inviting me to read this poem, Moon is one of my favourite subject. I find it an articulate poem.10++

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 03 July 2020

Wow this is one of your masterpieces as you describe the moon brilliantly in a scientific poetic way that delights my lunarlover heart. Kudos for this great poem. Plz pleez do read and comment my newest poem too titled, 'the corona catastrophe '

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Mj Lemon 29 June 2020

Magnificent! And I come away with a realization that perhaps little in the universe is 'mere'. A great work, Yoonoos.

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