Mom..! ! .... It's A Bomb…..! ! ! ! ! ............ Poem by Pooja Karnani

Mom..! ! .... It's A Bomb…..! ! ! ! ! ............

Rating: 5.0


Rushing towards the platform..
My mom yelling… " C'mon….
We are getting late..
For this train in a week this is the only date.. "

I was left behind in the melee..
The way I was not able to see…
I hope my parents wont leave me behind..
Oh! God please be kind..

Around me there were many other parents
Some people searching for their friends…
Then.. something loud..
Burst in the middle of crowd..! !

Smoke..fire..confusion..noise.. prevailed all around..
‘ black Friday ‘ was witnessed by the town..
To reach my parents I needed to flee,
But I was stuck in this melee.

I am afraid of losing them
Oh! God please be my best friend..
Please let together be ' us ‘
I promise I won't create further fuss…

In my life they are a ‘ must ‘
They are the only ones on whom I can trust.
I had tears and more tears..
As I never encountered such a fear……..

Oh! God please hear…
They are the only ones to me who are 'near ‘and ‘dear'
That day I realised..
That they are my possessions prized..

They are my parents..
They are my true friends..
I promise all my bad habits I will amend..
And this change in me would sustain till the end..

Then fortunately very near, I heard my mom..
" It's 6: 30…… c'mon….
It's getting late..
Today is your examination date..! ! "

So real all did it seem..
Though it was only a dream..
But terrorists won't realize..
That before planting a bomb it's not ever enough to think thrice..

But alas..! they are full of avarice
They are blind, they cannot see such tears in the eyes..
For their greed which is not nice..
One day God will surely make them pay the price..! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Saniya Galeyeva 24 May 2012

Such a touching poem. There is much fuss in our life, so much fuss that we forget to love those whom we love... Your poem reminds us that we must appreciate our family and friends.

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Wahab Abdul 24 May 2012

good, terrorist not for the greed......your poem is a good one, nice flow, good wording and good rhyme too, i like it, please read some of my poems too

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Lady Keva 24 May 2012

Wow! Such a sad poem its ur best work ever I loved it and I give it a 10

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Anil Kumar Panda 24 May 2012

very nice.can this change the hearts of the brutes? liked it.

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Yog Poudyalz 10 July 2012

IT's a nice poem This poem is easy simple heart touching and fantastic

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Abhimanyu Kumar.s 25 June 2012

lovely piece of art. keep growing. lots of love. abhimanyu kumar.s

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Swetha Vanakayalapati 22 June 2012

its a worthy note you made at the end! !

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Sharad Juneja 31 May 2012

really a masterpiece

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Captain Cur 24 May 2012

To change the heart of men who hate, they must let God in. If they refuse they will never piece together the fragments of their broken souls. Very good poem, emotional, suspenseful and thought provoking.

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