Mom Poem by dilstefny DD8

Mom

Rating: 4.5


Give me a chance mom
to show my pure love

Your smiles make me
an angel
Your kind create me
a helping girl
Your care shows me
as a child
Your anger made me
a good girl
Your love tells me
Your the my ever goddess


your the mother
you gave me such a create life
Your the one
Any one cant be a good mom like you


Mom,
I fallen in love with your CARE
GUIDE
WARM
PROTECTION
LOVE...

Mom, i love you lot.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I love my mom
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dilstefny Dd 23 November 2012

Thank you so much for your comments.Yeah its my typing mistakes.GUIDE., , ANGEL..... Sorry for that.

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Bri Edwards 21 November 2012

just in case it is NOT a typo (typographical error/typing mistake) , i want to point our that i believe angle should read angel. and i don't know what you mean by 'GUILD' here; could you explain it for me please? thanks for sharing. you are very fortunate to have such a mom.

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