Modern Day Predicament Poem by indira babbellapati

Modern Day Predicament

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busy busy...
over wht?

still to figure out...

meanwhile,

granules of powdered time
simply slip out through fingers!

06nove2009
20.02hrs

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarvesh Kulkarni 06 November 2009

awesome! wonderfully put, a simple thought. thank you.

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Sandra Martyres 18 November 2009

You bring out the 'time flies' syndrome very well in this brief but meaningful piece

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Sonya Florentino 10 November 2009

was it time well spent...or wasted....in the end, the answer becomes clear....

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Ranjit Ravindran 06 November 2009

We speak a lot about time... I was just wondering what people must have been thinking till they realized the existance of time!

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Indira Renganathan 06 November 2009

Busy busy over livelihood...everything is pell-mell after speedy time...nice read...thank you

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Joseph Poewhit 06 November 2009

Simply put - time does not wait.

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indira babbellapati

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visakhapatnam, india
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