Misunderstood? Poem by Laura Venter

Misunderstood?



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and then he shot
her,
ther ma was,
on the floor bleeding
i saw it
i saw it all
and every word is true
ma's eyes were closed
and she bled
o gosh
she bled it
true it tru
you gotta tell some 1
daddy did it
i saw him 1st
with the knife and then wit
da gun
it tru it tru
i promise......




Next time check your spelling, and try to make sentences shorter. I know you can write better if you just try. Next time come and ask me for a dictionary, it will help you.

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