Trust Is Now Untrusted... Poem by Laura Venter

Trust Is Now Untrusted...

Rating: 4.5


i trusted you once before,
but now my heart is sore,
because i found out,
the truth always there,
that the truth, i cant trust anyone,
is a truth i cannot bear,
i cannot look at you the same anymore
because you betrayed me once more
and trust is given and recieved
and theres something i musnt have percieved,
but there is one thing for sure,
you were someone i shoundtve believed
never again wil i be fooled
by your sly lies and cowardly acts
because you know,
you cant hide the facts,
so just walk away
and dont look back
dont say sorry
i wont cut you slack
because you are now,
untrusted

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 18 June 2009

'and dont look back dont say sorry i wont cut you slack because you are now, untrusted' Nice poem,10+++

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Malini Kadir 18 June 2009

really nice child......you have written with a maturity far beyond.....keep going It is passion that gives trust.....actions that reign forces it....keep it up!

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