Sylvia Chidi

Rookie - 47 Points (Germany)

Miss Cinderella's forgotten shoe


Miss Cinderella
O Miss Cinderella!

I reckoned my dreams would materialize true
When I stared into those beautiful eyes of you
Miss Cinderella
O Miss Cinderella
Thou forgot to cast behind thy only begotten shoe

I stand here in line in thy awaited queue
You enlighten from the limousine
I’m waiting for that heavenly sign
Miss Cinderella
O Miss Cinderella
What has become of you?
Thou forgot to cast behind thy only begotten shoe

So many miles I flew
Yet you have no clue
Of how much we can chew
Without your shoe, there is no preview
Of the fairy tale we could pursue
Miss Cinderella
O Miss Cinderella
Can’t you see this love tattoo?
Thou forgot to cast behind thy only begotten shoe

And now you have left the venue
Thoughts of your forgotten shoe
I will cherish and value
So close, so near, almost there
Miss Cinderella
O Miss Cinderella
If only you could undo
And cast behind thy forgotten shoe
But thou forgot to cast behind thy only begotten shoe

So the prince is gone
Life goes on
But my love for you is not withdrawn!

Copyright 2006 - Sylvia Chidi

Submitted: Tuesday, July 25, 2006
Edited: Wednesday, August 18, 2010

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Comments about this poem (Miss Cinderella's forgotten shoe by Sylvia Chidi )

  • Bronze Star - 6,222 Points Lyn Paul (12/5/2014 5:34:00 PM)

    So the prince is gone life goes on Yes we must move on. Love the feel and the positive ending. Thank You (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 5,478 Points Bri Edwards (2/10/2013 6:18:00 PM)

    interesting...clever... l like it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Theodora Petropoulos (12/2/2008 8:10:00 PM)

    I think it's a good poem, and I really like it because alot of kids like Cinderella and it will bring their attention and it's lovely.

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