Sylvia Chidi (Germany)

I lust for the fluid of your pen
Give it to me
Till I come all over
As a great poet.

You have really shown a good picture of apple breast.....err, lust. Here's what I can add:

Virtue And The Beast

To run, we could from threats besetting us
But naught we do for demons from within
Their obstacles laid on the paths we pass
Dictate the rise and fall our lives contain

Virtue does to a woman bind desire
When dreams of wayward thrills it would suppress
As though alarm when hearts are set afire
It screams out loud should she unzips her dress

Monsters and ghouls are far removed in woods
If there be what the heart so truly dreads
In man is beast lurking in murky moods
Knows many arms and sleeps in many beds.

definatly wasn't wordsworth but really made my day and thats really wat poetry is about

apple breast? kinda weird. but whatev.

i love the flow to your poem..and its so real

I loved your poem, excellent job!

This poem of yours has given me the biggest grin today Sylvia. You do have a wonderfully insightful way with words. 10 from lusty apple flavour Tai

Clever, insightful, well-imaged, sharp word play - a super poem. Kind regards, Gina.