Middle-Aged Poem by LeeAnn Azzopardi

Middle-Aged

Rating: 4.8


Two a.m.
I'll have the rest of my birthday cake
That is two days old
And I'll have another diet Coke
But I must be quiet opening it
Because my family sleeping still
My sister must go to work
In order to go back to sleep
I'll listen to a reading
With my new headphones
That I am still adjusting to
It's the only time when my dog will be up
Wanting to pee
Sleepy I am getting another diet Coke
And drift into dreamland forgetting
That I am middle-age

Saturday, October 15, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: aging
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Smoky Hoss 16 October 2022

I really like this. There's a metaphoric mixture here, the cake/diet coke image. Youth has passed into middle age, waking into drifting off to sleep. Wants to needs. Superb.

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me poet yeps poet 16 October 2022

HAPPY MID AGED LET DOGGY PEE YOUNG PUPPY

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Anjandev Roy 16 October 2022

Fantastic write..., ..enjoyed it......

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Michael Cochrane 16 October 2022

Well written LeeAnn x

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Carl Roussell 16 October 2022

Niddle aged - a new phase in life but also a reminder of things that we can no longer do. Still it can be an exciting time

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Anjandev Roy 29 July 2023

Marvelous piece....thank u...LeeAnn....

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David Wood 31 October 2022

Belated Birthday wishes LeeAnn, an absolute classic of a poem we all can relate to. It flows beautifully and slowly as we csn feel the time slowly dripping by. I can relate to Cooper as Clara was the same. Bravo! !

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Bri Edwards 18 October 2022

Your Coke must be super-carbonated to make so much noise! What till you're MY AGE. Then try to forget how old you are. Well maybe by then you'll have NO TROUBLE forgetting. bri : )

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 18 October 2022

Loved your poem that is so true to life........10 for sure dear poetess LeeAnn

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 18 October 2022

An interesting poem that is a mixture of emotions, a move into the middle age with diet coke, cake, sleeping and waking and the responsibility of taking the dog to pee.

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