Metamorphosis/Unchanged Poem by Unwritten Soul

Metamorphosis/Unchanged

Rating: 4.5


when the world keep spinning
when the days keep changing

everything gonna be changed
day to night
winter to autumn

when the light become dark
when the bud start blooming

everything will be different
but my friend...
there are something that never changed
and its remain unchanged...

our friendship,
loyalty,
and faith
these things never been changed
even when the world keep spinning
or when days keep changing

and the day we become older and worse,
our friendship become wiser and greater

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marieta Maglas 04 July 2010

Wonderful poem with a perfect theme..Great work

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when the light become dark when the bud start blooming your eye catches the changes I love to watch and remember within the soul

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 February 2010

when the world keep spinning when the days keep changing everything gonna be changed day to night winter to autumn.yes it needs change and everything has to bechanged... nice one....10 read mine...child.... anywhere, mary to marry

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Changing from this to that! Cleverly written poem. Well done.; D Read, Significant, on, metamorphosis.

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Harindhar Reddy 03 December 2011

Hello! Hello! Fellow poet, Dearest Soul i am in the seventh heaven that I writing my poem with poets like you - (Unwritten soul) , Vippin's, Amith Ray, Crimson Love are the star poets whose poetry impressed me hence i look for inspiration from you.......... yet there is another poetess Jacqui broad who is my heart-mate....... 'and the day we become older and worse, our friendship become wiser and greater' However, this poem of yours is special as it is on hot topic FRIENDSHIP. I usher all the above energetic poets to write about nature as the new is approaching.... let us all start the age of Romanticism. My special honest invitation to you - unwritten soul I am longing to see out and out nature poem from you... sorry to ask but i love your poems...

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Kesav Easwaran 06 February 2020

True friendship grows only young over years passing. A very good write on a novel theme 10+

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Rebecca Navarre 16 December 2017

Wow! ! ! ! ! Again Just Swept Away By How Beautiful Of Feel In The Words You So Say! ! ! ! ! Spoken So Beautifully Poetic! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Ever So Very Very Many Endless...1OS! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 November 2017

Ofcourse there is metamorphosis in every moment in this cosmos. The earth is spinning and day is changing to night and vice versa. The seasons are changing. Buds are going to be changed to flowers. But there is something that never be changed is friendship. It is on loyalty and faith. Woderfully crafted and amazingly shared. Beautiful poem.

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Mj Lemon 26 June 2017

A great life lesson, Soul. You made think that some things change so much, they actually change right back to the way they were. The seasons remind me of renewal and restoration. A wonderful work, Soul.

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Kanav Justa 17 December 2012

This is one of the few poems you read. In the end you feel happy... this is something very difficult to achieve...

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