Autumn Winds

Rookie - 10 Points (July 22 1993 / Sanfrancisco, California)

Message Tone - Poem by Autumn Winds

I can hear you call from a distance
And the message tone beeps
A surfaced memory
Now and forever
Forever and never
And the message tone beeps
A smile on your voice
A laugh at hand
I can see you stare;
But you're not really there
And the message tone beeps


Comments about Message Tone by Autumn Winds

  • Gold Star - 8,525 Points Khairul Ahsan (7/30/2013 1:19:00 AM)

    ...And the message tone beeps...
    An excellent piece, very touchy! As if I can also hear/see the beep, of a distant caller, nowhere near, or ever to be! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, July 28, 2013

Poem Edited: Sunday, July 28, 2013


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