Autumn Winds

Rookie - 10 Points (July 22 1993 / Sanfrancisco, California)

A Shooting Star - Poem by Autumn Winds

A shooting star
Makes it's way across the sky
A traveler in the placid night

Upon that star
Lay a million wishes
Waiting to become true

We hope
It will grant our wish
Like a genie in a bottle

We wish
And wish upon that
Incandescent ball of glowing dreams

All though
It's futile we still
Wish and hope and dream


Comments about A Shooting Star by Autumn Winds

  • Silver Star - 4,225 Points Valerie Dohren (6/26/2012 11:52:00 AM)

    Lovely poem, may all good wishes come true. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Heather Wilson (6/26/2012 4:36:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem, a joy to read, wishes do sometimes come true, (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 117 Points Thomas Duncky (6/26/2012 3:54:00 AM)

    Yes we still dream n bet our wishes on that incandescent glowing ball of light for in dreams we live our lives! Great poem! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, June 26, 2012

Poem Edited: Wednesday, August 15, 2012


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