Meeting The almighty. Poem by Nabakishore Dash

Meeting The almighty.

Rating: 4.6


A hardcore criminal
annoyed a monk, time
and again, asking him
how to meet God.
At last the wicked was
told to ascend a mountain
with five big pieces of
stone on his head.

After some initial climbing,
the criminal expressed
inability to proceed further
because of miserable pain
in his neck and backbone.
The monk allowed to
throw the uppermost piece
from his cranium.

Ultimately all pieces were
discarded, one after the other,
at repeated intervals
on his complaints of pain.
Only then he could reach the
apex of that mountain.

At the top, the monk explained
him that it is impossible
to reach the supreme Creator
with the weight of all our
sins, misdeeds, greed and illegality.
Only when we cast off those
wrongdoings from our mind, speech
and action, meeting with the
God would be a reality.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
May be possible to meet God, but there is condition that we should get rid of the sins we are doing here on the Earth.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 03 March 2023

CONGRATULATIONS on being chosen as THE MPOTD! . TOP Marks! Sharp philosohical provoking poem, amazingly rendered! Most deserving Dr. Dash!

1 1 Reply
Indira Renganathan 21 January 2023

A good preaching poem that should be read by all...thanks for sharing

1 0 Reply
Sylvia Frances Chan 03 March 2023

This should be read by all poets, since the philiosophical input is huge, and we as poets do live with this philosophy in our life..Great poem, Dr. Dash! Revisiting this poem is a must to get the best insight!

0 0
Anjandev Roy 03 March 2023

Truly brilliant.....well deserved POD.......thank u, dear poet.....

0 0 Reply
Rose Marie Juan-austin 21 January 2023

A beautiful and meaningful poem of faith. Well thought out and expressed.

0 0 Reply
Thomas Case 05 March 2023

Wonderful job

0 0 Reply
Rose Marie Juan-austin 03 March 2023

Congratulations for having this wonderful and well thought out poem as Poem Of The Day. An accolade you truly deserved.

0 0 Reply
Rose Marie Juan-austin 03 March 2023

A meaningful story coined in a beautiful poem. Brilliant presentation. Creating a story is sometimes the best way to impart knowledge / lesson.

0 0 Reply
M.J. Lemon 03 March 2023

A superb verse! And congratulations on Poem of the Day..

0 0 Reply
Bri Edwards 03 March 2023

I guess I'll never meet 'my maker'. And She will never meet me! ! ;) bri

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success