DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK


Me and Moon unto heaven


Me and Moon unto heaven
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The day did depart
And twilight did alight
Patches of evening clouds
Seen swirling around
And the sky turning gray
Though blue had its day
In a garden of roses and daisies
At this hour solemn
I was a lone guest
Seeking sojourn at best
And the Nature's beauty at its play
And some auxiliaries restful and away
Enticed me and taken
Into a land of fancy
Where I could see
Me and Moon entwined
In a company divine
Unto heaven as if
Upon a chariot of wine
Of pleasures
And leisures to dine..

Submitted: Saturday, June 28, 2014

Topic of this poem: nature


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Comments about this poem (Me and Moon unto heaven by DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK )

  • Bronze Star - 6,475 Points Salini Nair (7/21/2014 2:35:00 AM)

    beautiful write..like it.............. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 205 Points Abhipsa Tripathy (7/3/2014 11:49:00 PM)

    Wow! very nice words are used here to describe a beautiful moonlight evening.An amazing poem. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,104 Points Valsa George (6/30/2014 6:05:00 AM)

    This is just lovely... Deepak! You have described a mesmerizing evening giving way to a moonlit night! I envy 'the company divine'! A 10 (Report) Reply

    Gold Star - 15,253 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (6/30/2014 10:43:00 AM)

    Many many thanks.......Valsa.....I am humbled...............

  • Silver Star - 7,536 Points Geetha Jayakumar (6/28/2014 12:34:00 PM)

    Fantastic flow of words...Beautiful imagery of words leading to heaven with beautiful moon along...
    In a company divine
    Unto heaven as if
    Upon a chariot of wine
    Of pleasures
    And leisures to dine..
    Beautiful captivating lines..Loved reading each lines... (Report) Reply

    Gold Star - 15,253 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (6/30/2014 10:44:00 AM)

    Many many thanks.......Geetha.....I am humbled...............

  • Gold Star - 21,256 Points Gangadharan Nair Pulingat (6/28/2014 3:33:00 AM)

    Nature it is a source of happiness around us and this poem is also very beautiful. (Report) Reply

    Gold Star - 15,253 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (6/30/2014 10:45:00 AM)

    Many many thanks.......Gangadharan.....I am humbled...............

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