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DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK


Me and Moon unto heaven


Me and Moon unto heaven
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The day did depart
And twilight did alight
Patches of evening clouds
Seen swirling around
And the sky turning gray
Though blue had its day
In a garden of roses and daisies
At this hour solemn
I was a lone guest
Seeking sojourn at best
And the Nature's beauty at its play
And some auxiliaries restful and away
Enticed me and taken
Into a land of fancy
Where I could see
Me and Moon entwined
In a company divine
Unto heaven as if
Upon a chariot of wine
Of pleasures
And leisures to dine..

Submitted: Saturday, June 28, 2014

Topic(s): nature


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  • Gold Star - 10,136 Points Valsa George (6/30/2014 6:05:00 AM)

    This is just lovely... Deepak! You have described a mesmerizing evening giving way to a moonlit night! I envy 'the company divine'! A 10 (Report) Reply

    Gold Star - 11,061 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (6/30/2014 10:43:00 AM)

    Many many thanks.......Valsa.....I am humbled...............

  • Veteran Poet - 4,587 Points Geetha Jayakumar (6/28/2014 12:34:00 PM)

    Fantastic flow of words...Beautiful imagery of words leading to heaven with beautiful moon along...
    In a company divine
    Unto heaven as if
    Upon a chariot of wine
    Of pleasures
    And leisures to dine..
    Beautiful captivating lines..Loved reading each lines... (Report) Reply

    Gold Star - 11,061 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (6/30/2014 10:44:00 AM)

    Many many thanks.......Geetha.....I am humbled...............

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