May I Love You Poem by jan fuentez

May I Love You

Rating: 5.0


May I love you
From afar, from a distant
Without your knowing, I do care
For you a lot, no matter what
I've strive to stop this
Feeling, this emotion
And yet it it keeps burning
Like a flame
So hot, and I don't
Know the consequences

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mel Vincent Basconcillo 29 April 2009

a deep and lovely piece..very heartfelt and heartwarming..amazing poem

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Kesav Easwaran 22 April 2009

love flame inside burning hot...well, one wouldn't be able to put it out...one wouldn't want to...short pem softly romantic...10

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asma Jone 03 December 2008

Like short poems alot that in so little words they show alot of meaning..great one

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so sweet... i love the sentence that says feeling this emotion i feel so much love behind thoughs words.. great piece

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