May I In Abject Service Be As Free Poem by Captain Cur

May I In Abject Service Be As Free

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May grave passion yield fealty to the sea;
may I in abject service be as free,
shorn of an empire, compelled from home
surrounded by the limitless unknown;
where currents pull me, the sail masts sway
in deference to my own will, obey!
To the beauty and subtleness of change
forever outward on this bright blue range
each thought I measure like the coming wave,
am I a whole, or a part of the same?
In days of struggle and of perfect ease
where pleasure cannot satisfy
pain perhaps can please.

Saturday, September 22, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: journey,reflection,sea
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mihaela Pirjol 24 September 2018

''To the beauty and subtleness of change forever outward on this bright blue range'' - I love these lines! The rhyme and rhythm accompany perfectly the subject and the mood of the poem!

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Captain Cur 24 September 2018

To obey the sea, what greater pleasure can there be. Thanks for the comment Mihaela.

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Kostas Lagos 23 September 2018

I caught myself dancing with this one! And I never dance...

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Captain Cur 24 September 2018

If only I had a band! Unfortunately our flutist took a dive the other day.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 September 2018

each thought I measure like the coming wave, am I a whole, or a part of the same? In days of struggle and of perfect ease where pleasure cannot satisfy pain perhaps can please......so touching and impressive with nice theme. Beautiful poem.10

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Captain Cur 24 September 2018

Kumarmani, thank you for taking the time to read and comment. Life is busy but you make time for all.

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