Mavis Poem by paddy d daly

Mavis

Rating: 5.0


I keep very unsociable
hours nowadays,
up all night,
Digging into the rafters
of my brain,
trying to dig out words
to string into a line
that might be
Meaningful or Meaningless,
depending on how it is read.
Mavis, Oh Mavis, how can
you stand this madness,
Patience, now that is a word,
A word I could write a million
times but still not
describe you, Ypres,
Western Belgium,1915,
digging the trenches beside
the Canadian first and
the royal Irish rifles,
how I suffered then,
came back a shell,
how you have suffered
since, my dearest darling Mavis,
The madness of war.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
(circa 1920)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Noreen Carden 11 November 2014

Really touches the heart this one Paddy beautifully written

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Shania K. Younce 26 August 2014

I saw imagery, which is good. The poem is good. Well done. Bien!

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