Forgiving God Poem by paddy d daly

Forgiving God

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Day One.
On the first day I forgave God,
I was happy.
Lying in my bed, I said,
Not god forgive me but I
forgive you,
For what you put me through,
And all my people,
past present and future
and for what you might do,
I forgive you....

Day Two.
I think of Jesus,
Prancing around Galilee,
pretending to fight the romans
and pretending not to,
Speaking in parables, which
I call, 'sitting on the fence'
No more god than I am
'Jesus' is what I say
when I see something
I cant believe in, , ,
'JESUS'

Day three.
Never moved, still lying in my bed,
I have a vision, Three stories up
in an attic bed,
Stretched and stiff,
God is Dead.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Might be depression
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shania K. Younce 26 August 2014

I do not agree with the Good Lord is dead part. However, I really enjoy reading the poem. It has a nice flow. Bien!

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Noreen Carden 15 January 2014

Hello Paddy a very interesting poem really well written a very enjoyable read i hope its not true because we are in real trouble but apart from whether i agree with the views expressed its a wonderful poem so well done to you

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