Make Or Brake....The Real Value Poem by v.m.saraswathy munuswamy

Make Or Brake....The Real Value

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Every sad moments will vanish like a bubble if
your asserts are good deeds and patience;
our longing for anything makes it worth but
we know the real value after loosing it.

If you raise head and face the heat of the sun
you could chase; your own shadow
use your flaws and errors as the experience
the stepping stone to reach the pinnacle.

You choose the best if choice is there
or else give the best to decide the rest
your confidence prove the inner ability, though
someone's inability to notice it.

Let not your ego stops the happiness
be ready to apologize
to retain the relationships
its you who can make or brake the real value.

Saturday, August 6, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: value
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
you can make or brake
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 09 August 2016

Yes, you are right. Sad moment is just like a bubble and this will definitely vanish. Raising face towards sun and standing we witness our own shadows. This is amazing. Retaining relationship keeps real value.10

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welcome sir, i believe and follow righteously thanks again dear sir

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 August 2016

To face the real values of life! No matter the odds. Thanks for sharing.

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believe yourself, you could do anything as you wish to lead a righteous life, thanks friend

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