Make Me Fall In Love Poem by v.m.saraswathy munuswamy

Make Me Fall In Love

Rating: 5.0


Will you make ME fall in love
every time i see you?

Will you love me until your last breath
every time to think only ME?

Will you make the distance invisible
every time by your much love?

Will you be my lovable friend
every time to make me feel alright?

Will you care, share and dare honestly
every time to compromise and convince ME?

Will you handle my mood swings and love
every time the mess I make?

Will you be in my ups and downs
every time to see the best of MINE?

Will you wake up to feel my heart beat
every time accepting all the Imperfections?

If so tell me that you are a unique person
let me cuddle and hug you all my life!

Tuesday, July 12, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: expression
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
i will cuddle and hug you all my life if your are the one to love me all my life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unnikrishnan E S 13 July 2016

Hi Saraswathy, This is what a poem of love should be. Will you be in my ups and downs Every time to see the best of Mine This is all the love expects from the counterpart! Loved reading. Well done.10++

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Thanks a lot for the valuable positive feedback, which could help me to estimate my skill of writing, welcome sir, this is the expectation of all sincere lovers, but some are unfortunate, thanks again

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Sekharan Pookkat 13 July 2016

Rt choice of words but reflects doubts from the inner soul to heal the imperfections my perfect ten for sharing invisible thoughts

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Choice is for all, so we cannot impose or comple, but putting forward our demands and choosing the one who deserves our love is in our hands, what ever it is the great creator needs to hear all our cries and answer, thanks sir for your review after a long time, blessed I am, welcome

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 July 2016

Will you make the distance invisible? ! ! Question. To answer your heart with the muse of true love. And, to meet the right person in life to love you FOREVER! Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this lovely poem with us.

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I believe in long lasting love abd relationship, accepting each others flaws and compassion, to live forever, but it's meager, so the words reflect it, thanks

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