Oh! little stars..
Are you waiting for DAWN?
I am also like you...longing for DAWN!
When it dawns...
you will disappear;
but.....
In my longing for DAWN....
The DAWN itself will disappear! !
Nice, neat play on words that is both sweet and satisfying to my poetic appetite!
In my longing for DAWN.... The DAWN itself will disappear! ! this is symbolic writing........ longing and the realization that it will disappear. does it denote happiness or sadness dear poetess..? ?
Hi Saraswathy, All through our lives, we long for things, not knowing that they are so short-lived. Many things we cherish to possess disappear, before we have even possessed it, like dawn. The sense of loss and void they create in our hearts are much bigger than our longing itself. Fantastic observation and exquisite imagery that make the poem extra-ordinary. Thanks for sharing.
Happy to receive encouraging comments from a grounded person like you, mostly our dreams are like dew drops disappears very soon before we realise it's beauty, thanks
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Oh, this an awesome Poem, thank you for sharing it with us.
welcome, my heartful thanks
My pleasure..: -)