Make No Attempt Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
Make No Attempt
I shall turn you into gold
So that can be noticed by whole world
You have potential of being called beauty
The natural gift from an almighty
Yes you are arrogant and greedy
As any one can expect as honorable lady
But it works at some places only
Not everything can be weighed in terms of money
Love demands sacrifice
Full of words with promises
Stand for one love
And honestly believe
No need to shed tears
When you fail or time comes to bear
The agony and pain may tear you apart
Still you are love and precious part
The life turns then into memory
You may feel happy or sorry
Love carries to extreme corner of happiness
That at least counterpart is living with at ease
Make no attempt to influence
As love flows and feels fragrance
It has its own origin
It matters less with loss or gain
Impurities melt with one touch
That is why gold is called as such
Both entities end in one identity
Love is such fine blend of quality
Explaining life. Roberta MackoLess than a minute ago Such a sincere way to explain Life, Love, Happiness, Pain, and sometimes greed.
Good. Sam RajLess than a minute ago Good subject Good expression Good comparison Keep writing Comment +1
Hasmukh Mehta welcome JaiRam Tiwari and Rajesh Jaiswal like this. 2 secs · Unlike · 1
i like it alot, its simple but deep at the same time. i think my only criticism would be that the rhyming was forced at some points which made the sentence structure wonky and it was missing a few subject in, there could have been a few more (yous) 1 hour ago by Liz Smith
Gail Desautels Again.. What is wrong with years for both men and woman.. It is a sign of sensitivity and human ness.. Likelihood high of being able to empathize with others... 2 hrs · Unlike · 1
Gail Desautels Not years... Tears.. Duh editor drone dear. The water that comes out of your eyes... Stupid male.. 2 hrs · Unlike · 1
Gail Desautels Or are you a stupid female drone... Ran Into a few of those today too.. 2 hrs · Unlike · 1
Gail Desautels Dead giveaways... Literally 2 hrs · Unlike · 1
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I shall turn you into gold So that can be noticed by whole world