Make Me Sleep Poem by Asif Baloch

Make Me Sleep

Rating: 5.0


Here is the dagger
as I put
pierce my heart
as you would

there you find
nothing but
lazy thuds and
broken breaths
hold it on the
palm of your hand
squeez it,
tear it,
gash it

pull me out from
this misery
burn my desires and
the feelings tho I feel
save me from lonesome thoughts
help me to die, one last time
sing a lullaby to make me sleep
sleep like this never to wake
sleep with peace and love filled dreams

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Kamran Haider 23 December 2008

I must say Asif bhai, you have soo truthfully and sincerely portrayed the anguish and lamentation of your heart and mind in this simply beuatiful poem... It has really touched my heart and I couldn't stop a teardropp to fall from my eyes...

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Kite Remedy 31 December 2008

beautiful, pure, delicate, indeed a good work..

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 28 December 2008

A great sacrification and a good writes indeed Asif.Keep it up bro!

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Blue Eyes 27 December 2008

oh! what a romantic poem.i love it.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 27 December 2008

What a poem Bhayya, so powerful, hairsplitting fast, running through any heart.....We are all with u dear Bhayya........

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Anjali Sinha 23 December 2008

With every beat of my heart It hurts when you say good bye, And with every beat of my heart Drops another tear I cry your poem has made me shed tearrrrrrrrrrrs A++++++++ and many 100000000ssssss regards anju

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