You There Poem by Asif Baloch
You There
Hello There
yoooohoooo
You there
don't look here and There
yes you honey
I'm talking to you
these words thus written
is about you only you
coz you are the reason
we feel changing seasons
in lust and love
in lows and highs
in darkness and lights
in depths of tides
you make us feel
the fregrance thus heals
the injuries and scars
put by loneliness and thoughts
you are the one,
once told
who's words thus floats
like rhythm, like limes
soothern souls and minds
like dancing daffodils
like fragrance of rose
yes dear yes
you are that one
spreading words
of love and hope
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(this poem I wrote after being inspired by the poets in poemhunter and all others who's poems till now i have read......)
P.S. this poem is not about pleasing anyone, its about the feelings i felt after reading several poets............
Wooowww... this is for all the poet? thank you, , , hehehe... the poet is always share they life and their love, , , beautifulll... nice! give u 10++
Nice beginning - graps one's attention. Good use of the seasonsal images and contrasts. I like the lightheartedness and playfulness of its reading.
Hey youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu this is nice.. I like the word play here.. good.. different one indeed... nice to read! ! many tens.... Cheeerss! ! ! ! ! shash! !
the conversational style, in modern lingo catches the eye. expressive. aren't we all inspired by fellowpoets on ph. we are like an extended family..lovely, Asif. i wrote a poem, My dear friends on poem hunter. style different, you might like it.10 Mamta
hmmmm---- what should i say about u? i m totally speechless. Asif u are just fantastic poet. its really very interesting, good and marvelous poem. thnx 4 sharing. 10+++++++++++++++++++++++.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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I think it's deal on a messages