Magical Flute… 2506-12 Poem by saadat tahir

Magical Flute… 2506-12

Rating: 3.3


lazy and sheathed the carrier at ease
no sooner a bit to eyes a please

rises to the occasion slowly swells
soon any doubts in prospectives quells

gladiator that fights a proxy war
always welcome this rated star

slowly puffs up and takes it place
by princes strong and debonair rake

baring its head through the mane
standing steady proud and vain

the gorged veins on its neck
solidly secured to a hirsute deck

at pat and prompt stands in force
hard and naughty delightfully coarse

a pied piper taking many to dips
Invited it glides and easily slips

as it huffs on a steamy course
goes with puffs and cries hoarse

Long and luscious music it plays
A magical flute by nights and days

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Michael Jackson and Nefertari.... :)

remember the time.....
http: //www.youtube.com/watch? v=LeiFF0gvqcc&feature=relmfu


Original
25 June,2012
Islamabad-Pakistan
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
King Big Head 24 June 2012

people say I'm magical

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Neela Nath Das 28 June 2012

I loved it.Kudos to you poet.

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Indira Babbellapati 29 June 2012

hmmmmmmm: :)))))))))

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Captain Cur 29 June 2012

Very interesting double take. I liked it, very creative.

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Kasia Fedyk 30 June 2012

This poem is magical and beautiful Saadat, I so enjoyed it reading it and found myself in this music. Sublime. Thank you.

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Ruby Honeytip 23 December 2012

Ever the lady.....I shall merely smile...nod....and say, this is a mighty poem: -) I shall say nothing of my talents as a flute player at all.

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Rigzin Namgyal 21 August 2012

..as i always said..there is fire in your writing.. :)

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Ruth Walters 14 August 2012

The flute truly is a magical instrument as is this poem that gives it life....

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Nadood Al Nasser 17 July 2012

very beautiful, it is very extraordinary. loved it

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Jahan Zeb 16 July 2012

Simply......I want to study you to understand poetry, your poetry in particular...... Not Difficult, For that I just have to visit you in Islamabad and ask you lots of questions. Really you are great sir. Remarkable

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