Loving Poem by Rasul Raessi

Hi. I read your poems. I didn't give comments to others because they were too, really toooooooooooo short. You know, I don't want to let you down, But I think it would be much better if you gather these short pieces and make some relations between them and publish them as one. To tell the truth, I myself am fan of short poems but not these miniature ones. And let's talk about this poem (LOVING) - Well, this poem has a lot to say if you used the words deliberately. One can interpret the flowers symbolically (White rose is for innocence, Red one is passion and crazy love! And in English culture the yellow rose is actually the symbol of Love) .The ending part is actually good. That you want to change the previous repetitve loves go away and a green and fresh one replace it. Anyway, I didn't mean to be rude or harsh. I just wanted to give you my ideas. Hope they won't annoy you. I'd be glad to see your comments on my poetry too. Thanks