Love - Untouched(Bucolic) Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Love - Untouched(Bucolic)

Rating: 5.0


Her body is a melting pot
On the silken sheet
with pillow beneath
trying hard to hold spinning head
temperature falling
heartbeat rising
body heat ignites the fumes
smell of love
in the air and everywhere
my wishes spiral bind the body and mind
hairs like desert of vast eternity
with dunes of desires
silken arms making waves and
despair was meager to obliterate
yearning to slurp those juicy lips
yet he dare not to ignite mutual flames.

Thursday, January 31, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 31 January 2019

Quite a passionate poem! Beautifully done with metaphors and images of original and powerful poetic appeal.

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M Asim Nehal 01 February 2019

Thanks Much Ms Sandra.

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Rajeshwari Bala 31 January 2021

Your poem have magical touch and takes reader to rejoice moments.

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Michael Jack 12 July 2020

Breathtaking poem with such a passion you wrote it came live to me.

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Gordon Walter 17 April 2019

Awesome love poem. loved it 10

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Zuzu Mutairi 23 February 2019

A sensual love poem with twisted climax. Loved the way you wrote this poem, Asim.10

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M Asim Nehal 26 February 2019

Thx Much Z O

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Mihaela Pirjol 01 February 2019

Wow! - Yes! This is a fiery poem! We do not get the chance to read one of this every day! That is Love! That is Passion! That is Life! That is M. Asim Nehal's Poetry! Sublime!

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Rajeshwari Bala 31 January 2021

Dear poet you said it appropriately. Your comment is wonderful.

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M Asim Nehal 26 February 2019

Thank u so much my friend Mihaela.

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