Lost Self Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Lost Self

Rating: 5.0


Umpteen times he saw his face
Spotless, clean and clear
Now when he stands before the mirror
To his surprise! Here are so many scratches
He is unable to count and recall
How and when it happened?
Was it when he cleaned the mirror?
Or when he washed his face
Now time stands between them
Mocking and joking,
When everything is lost in the dusky sky.

Tuesday, April 9, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: philosophical
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 10 April 2019

They say a mirror is a reflection of not just your mind but your soul as well. The scratches appear when the mind is clogged and confused with negative thoughts.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 10 April 2019

When you look at the mirror with a clear mind of pure thoughts, you see a beautiful face without any blemishes.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 10 April 2019

To see a clear and beautiful face in the mirror that does not mock or joke, just remain your beautiful inner Self -the Soul of sublime nature, of beauty and purity.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 10 April 2019

A wonderful poem full of profound thoughts, Asim ji.......A 100

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Flower Prince 09 April 2019

Wow! Wow! Hi darling Asim poet, a lovely poem you have written. Dusky sky is mocking and joking. Thanks! This deserves 10 darling.

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Indira Renganathan 18 April 2019

Sometimes mirror also looses its clarity in course of time ' Now time stands between them Mocking and joking, When everything is lost in the dusky sky., ....thought provoking poem 10++ thank you Asim for sharing such lovely short poems with us...also thanks a lot for all your comments on my poems....God bless you

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Gordon Walter 17 April 2019

Yes wondering what happened and how? Great intriguing poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 April 2019

When everything is lost in the dusky sky, mocking and joking going on. This poem is very thought provoking and brilliantly penned and shared.

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Nadeem Ishaque 11 April 2019

Mirrors are flat. Depth of image in a mirror is an illusion. And where do the scratches belong? Is it the lost self or the lost perception of self? Well written, meditative piece of writing!

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 April 2019

Dusky sky! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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