I need to reach your thinking wave universe
When love is a river and weaves through the verse.
We are man and woman made by God from clay.
Maybe this clay will be cosmic dust someday.
Maybe from the same sun cooling could be made
The planets Venus and Mars with their fragile jade.
I want to save this love from its growing shade,
A tall tree that by the karmic winds is swayed.
Your soul is a Norse verse composed by a skald
Who keeps the sunlight in his heart emerald.
I feel your suffering between rain and tears.
Keep the tender moments through the loving years.
Poem by Marieta Maglas
Because I know so well that from the same clay Our bodies and Galaxy have been made yesterday.....bonding even in eteral and heaveny abode... beautiful write and deserves attention... read mine...... butterflies aroubd, o, mother, papa do u know and papa u too? comment too
read some of your poems, liked them, thanx for your comment on my poem STOIC SILENCE,
Reading the poem makes me think you have a unique style of putting words to life; playing with emotions and thoughts. Inter weaving magic so others can flow with your forceful wishes in joy.
From: Dick Badian (Netherlands ;) To: Marieta Maglas Date Time: 11/2/2009 6: 52: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: forever yours hello Marietta. I promise i will get deeper in your work. I sniffed arround.saw some beautifull pieces.so as soon as i can find more time I will dive into your thoughts. kind regards stuiterdick
I conceal you in my soul as an ancient skald, As I hold back the moonlight in my emerald. And I feel your pain by touching your tear, When gentle I incline myself for loving you my dear.no it is not obsolete love but eternal and pure feeling... i may definitely succedd...lovely imagination and step in right direction....10 read mine she did not come...mry to marry.....miss i miss you
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
That from the same stones could forever envies Both planet Venus and your very clean eyes...................... oh what a imagery of love by planet of Venus all when curved on stone by the caving eyes burn brilliant in the room of desire yet come and behold untold art of love........most evocative with eloquent flow of passion, yet it overwhelms being betiding on the sweet edges of luscious glow across the shore of ingenuity, m 10++++, thanks for sharing