Love Universe Poem by Marieta Maglas

Love Universe

Rating: 5.0


I need to reach your thinking wave universe
When love is a river and weaves through the verse.
We are man and woman made by God from clay.
Maybe this clay will be cosmic dust someday.

Maybe from the same sun cooling could be made
The planets Venus and Mars with their fragile jade.
I want to save this love from its growing shade,
A tall tree that by the karmic winds is swayed.

Your soul is a Norse verse composed by a skald
Who keeps the sunlight in his heart emerald.
I feel your suffering between rain and tears.
Keep the tender moments through the loving years.

Poem by Marieta Maglas

Thursday, June 25, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: sad
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr.subhendu Kar 29 June 2009

That from the same stones could forever envies Both planet Venus and your very clean eyes...................... oh what a imagery of love by planet of Venus all when curved on stone by the caving eyes burn brilliant in the room of desire yet come and behold untold art of love........most evocative with eloquent flow of passion, yet it overwhelms being betiding on the sweet edges of luscious glow across the shore of ingenuity, m 10++++, thanks for sharing

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 29 June 2009

wonderful poem.....stunning imagery...... loved it.

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Because I know so well that from the same clay Our bodies and Galaxy have been made yesterday.....bonding even in eteral and heaveny abode... beautiful write and deserves attention... read mine...... butterflies aroubd, o, mother, papa do u know and papa u too? comment too

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R.k Das 30 June 2009

read some of your poems, liked them, thanx for your comment on my poem STOIC SILENCE,

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nature 360 01 July 2009

Reading the poem makes me think you have a unique style of putting words to life; playing with emotions and thoughts. Inter weaving magic so others can flow with your forceful wishes in joy.

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Marieta Maglas 01 December 2009

From: Dick Badian (Netherlands ;) To: Marieta Maglas Date Time: 11/2/2009 6: 52: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: forever yours hello Marietta. I promise i will get deeper in your work. I sniffed arround.saw some beautifull pieces.so as soon as i can find more time I will dive into your thoughts. kind regards stuiterdick

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Barbara Smith 20 November 2009

it touched me. Thank you for this lovely poem 10+

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 November 2009

I conceal you in my soul as an ancient skald, As I hold back the moonlight in my emerald. And I feel your pain by touching your tear, When gentle I incline myself for loving you my dear.no it is not obsolete love but eternal and pure feeling... i may definitely succedd...lovely imagination and step in right direction....10 read mine she did not come...mry to marry.....miss i miss you

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Margaret Donaghy 30 October 2009

a poem with emotional ideas, lovely to read 10

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Agnes Parker 02 October 2009

a poem with high emotional content...............

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