Love The People Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Love The People

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Tune the eyes to sharpness
There are enough reasons to bring smile on face
Good and intelligent friends are across the world
Ready to mingle and come into our fold

Make heart little stronger
As it can remain idle no longer
It has to absorb all signals
With all niceties and affection on arrival

World is love hungry
Just say little sorry
For any of the lapses
There won’t be any misses

Say hello to stranger
He may look with no danger
Feel with affection and kindness
Now it is needed to talk about blindness

We have to offer
And not act as receiver
We got to be little thirsty
But eager and always ready

World may move with pace
There is enough of space
Rich and poor can exist side by side
We need not make differences very wide

Love the people across the globe
Think about their happiness and forget to rob
They are needed for all over survival
World may be poorer with their dismissal

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Bryan MacKenzie8 minutes ago feellike rhymes are forced rather than flow. too many ideas Comment 1 Comment+1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago it has continuity. find the beauty in each paragraph. remove any para still it may remain in tact

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Great message Poisin Maltbie2 minutes ago Well written, and it sends a great message. One that needs to be heard Comment +1 lots of ideas

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Tune the eyes to sharpness There are enough reasons to bring smile on face

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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