Love Story Poem by Sister Frances

Love Story

Rating: 4.8


I think you understand
Deep inside we can relate
That joyous surprise
When you enter Love's gates

That door just swung open
You barely touched the lock
And the other person...
Greeted before you knocked

Conversation flowed like water
And time it sped on by
You smiled after each sentence
Felt sad at each goodbye

You fought like cat and dog
But only then did you realise
No matter what the hurt was
You couldn't break those ties

So at the end you laugh
You thank God for that chance
For that window of opportunity
To find love and romance

Saturday, October 21, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I could write a thousand love poems and never really be statisfied with the message...
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unnikrishnan E S 08 January 2018

Lovely poem of love, again. Conversation flowed like water And time it sped on by You smiled after each sentence Felt sad at each goodbye. Quite true. And, You fought like cat and dog But only then did you realise No matter what the hurt was You couldn't break those ties Each little fight makes the bond stronger...

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Paul Hartal 27 October 2017

When you enter Love's gates, you are in the universal realm of desire and affection and of poetry. Thank you for sharing your poem..

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Sandra Feldman 21 October 2017

How well you word and paint the picture of love with such movement, truth and rhythm, that we're sorry when the poem ends. You're poems are simply wonderful.......

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 October 2017

A lovely poem with deep romantic urge.. very brilliantly penned.. you are a prolific writer Hannah .. Congratulations..!!

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Sister Frances 21 October 2017

Prolific...Thank you kind Dr.

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Rini Shibu 21 October 2017

Beautiful.. The beginning of another love story

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Sister Frances 21 October 2017

Who knows Rini..who knows :)

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