Love, Preserving Poem by Mark Heathcote

Love, Preserving

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Loves a fruit that requires preserving
if stored, in an equable larder
that isn't hot-tempered isn't fluctuating
hot then cold - might even keep its ardour
spring meandering into another lifetime
especially if not bruised mishandled
if it's cared for - can see out wintertime
enchanted, sweetened, heart gladdened.
But those that are badly handled just-won't-last
and sadly, they will perish as soon as not.
Leaving all your hopes and plans dashed
and that preserved loved fruit will rot
somewhere cankers will set-in take hold
and all you've cherished shall take on mould.

Wednesday, September 27, 2017
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mario, Lucien, Rene Odekerken 27 September 2017

Impressive writing Mark 10 out of 10 THANK YOU FOR SHARING MARIO ODEKERKEN

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Mark Heathcote 27 September 2017

Thank you, Mario, it is very much appreciated.

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Rini Shibu 27 September 2017

Wonderful write..Loved the metaphor used, well written if handled badly it will rot

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Mark Heathcote 27 September 2017

Much obliged Rini, very pleased you enjoyed this. :)

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