Love Is Born Poem by louis rams

Love Is Born

Rating: 5.0


my heart makes up my body parts
and my body parts make up my heart.

for when love strikes you
it touches every part of your being
and this is what i'm seeing.

you get a cold chill, and your hairs
stand up on end.
this is a sign.
this is a trend.

it is felt in so many different forms
that's how love is born.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 21 August 2009

beautifully expressed...the birth of love

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Kranthi Pothineni 23 August 2009

Love is born with beautiful smile on face and dies with a fire in heart.

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Shashendra Amalshan 23 August 2009

wowwwwwwwww.. this is so very sweet... yeah love's first bite! ! ! ! ! great one... with lv shan

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Deborah Cromer 22 August 2009

Love's first bite! Bitten by the love bug...It's true, things DO happen. Physically and mentally. Love has been a big a big, big part of poetry for a long, long time. You are keeping in the tradition with this. :) DC

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assume poetry................. nice romantic work.

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Christine Kerr 21 August 2009

Your is definitly from the heart, well said.10++ I couldn't rersist in adding my two cents worth Your stomach churns Love is blind You begin to wonder If it's all in your mind

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