Love I Always Deserved Poem by RoseAnn V. Shawiak

Love I Always Deserved

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Having a chance to be with you in body and spirit has
given me the love I have always deserved in life.

Taking your heart into mine, letting it have it's way
within my being, loving how it touches me so tenderly.

Taking charge shyly, yet positively, all of my love
is yours while sharing with me this eternal spirit.

Energy innately given at the moment of conception,
having a chance to be with you in body and spirit.

It has given the blessedness of love that I've always
deserved throughout this life.

Thursday, September 17, 2015
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Daniel Brick 17 September 2015

THE LOVE I'VE ALWAYS DESERVED - What a bold and proud, thoroughly honest and upbeat view of love. I'm mean PROUD in its ancient sense of being worthy, not hiding behind false modesty, but affirming the pride and love because they have been earned. I know the path that led you to such an open, forthright declaration. I know it from details of your life you have told me and from your poems which effortlessly carry this message. Only a life well-lived gives birth to such a poem. And I bet Tushar and his beloved Tagore will agree.

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 September 2015

Blessedness of love. Nice piece.

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