SALINI NAIR

Gold Star - 6,648 Points (2/2/1981 / kottayam)

Love Dale - Poem by SALINI NAIR

It was the love dale
Valley of love and peace
There dwells the king of love
His queen was gorgeous peace
Trust lacking arguments
There the era was spontaneous
In that love dale dreams flourished
In that hue they mend the time
The mischief
Though it's the valley of love
Death was not prohibited
Death knocked at its doorstep
The king opened the gate with smile
Peace dash to it side
But the poor had entered the chariot
The deprived peace sobs at the rail
But the mischief took him away
In that love dale peace was alone
As love was absent
The dale turned to be a hell
Peace veil to some corner there
Without her love she kept silence
So that the silence swing all the side
Thus the valley turned to be a hell
There ruler was king Evil
There tears was the only resonance
Darkness was the warrior
So that it turned to be a devils paradise! ! !

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Poet's Notes about The Poem

Love and trust jointly creates a paradise. Absence one leads to misunderstanding and later to misery

Comments about Love Dale by SALINI NAIR

  • Gold Star - 22,359 Points Valsa George (7/30/2014 3:34:00 AM)

    For a smooth and joyful life peace and love have to coexist.... If one is absent, there will be a vacuum. But if at least one is left, I don't think the place will become a hell. So it would have been better if you said both Love and Peace together got into the chariot! Any way great imagination, Salini! (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 29,058 Points Gangadharan Nair Pulingat (7/29/2014 12:05:00 AM)

    In place of king love King evil makes victories sometimes. And slowly changes the devil's paradise what now transpires in our surroundings. Wonderful imaginations respected poet and may there be illuminated imaginations continue. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 16,314 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (7/28/2014 6:02:00 AM)

    Peace and love snatched away by darkness and evil...........peace a state of mind and love a passion stirred by
    mind both flourish with brighter aspects of life.....with positive frame of mind.......though sometimes get trapped
    by evil and destructive perspectives...............nice composition........... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, July 28, 2014



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