Lost You Poem by Priyanka Shetty

Lost You

Rating: 5.0


This moonlit night
In the dark sky a bright light
The stars that sing
The silence of the wind
Each day brings a hope new
Though i know i've lost you...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 13 September 2008

Each day brings a hope new Though i know i've lost you... A good line to remember

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Priyanka Shetty 09 June 2008

its moonlit night...... as in lit by the moon....... :)

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Rani Turton 06 May 2008

The emotional state of mind has been well highlighted by the moonlight night, the stars, the 'silence of the wind; ' Good work and evocative. Keep it up Priyanka.

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Ivor Hogg 07 April 2008

beauty in brief theres always hope

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Matt Gottlieb 22 March 2008

lovely it is sweet and deep.

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