Lost In Their Firey Lies Poem by Rose Bloodthorn

Lost In Their Firey Lies



I can see the fire in peoples eyes but 
I'm the ashes left behind 
then I Hear the air whispers words of dispair 
But the earth that quakes shakes me down
 but I fall in the river that flows and passes them by and forgets all their lies 
But Once an ugly duckling transformed into a swan just as a lost spirit found out who they really were. 
Now that my lost soul has found it's way I realize the path I must take

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Seale 27 June 2013

You Go Girl! Never stop writing...it's something you're born with and just takes writing to master..the more your write the better you'll get..and you're pretty darn good! Also, the more you read of other's works..the better you''ll get. Read novels of all kinds, learn from the writer's craft, their prose... You've got It! Now let it grow! ; -) Kelly.

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Fatima Nusairat 15 June 2013

Oh Rose how beautiful you are dear..love it..!

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Fatima Nusairat 15 June 2013

Oh Rose how beautiful you are dear..love it..!

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Gajanan Mishra 15 June 2013

I realize the path I must take, good poem, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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