Losing Your Way Poem by Kristen Brewster

Losing Your Way

Rating: 5.0


The swirls of darkness
pull me under for a while.
When I find the surface
I have to correct all the wrongs
I have happened to create.

Forgive me.

I was not strong enough,
but your persistence
makes me realize
what I have forgotten
and given up on.

Rescue me prince.
Show me what I can live for
don't let me go under again.

Too many times
I have lost my way.
Falling,
but your hand is there
to welcome me back
up to the surface.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bradley Lester 28 May 2009

Nice poem, short and sweet yet powerful. Good one

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Ronny Self 14 April 2009

I'm glad you DIDN'T stop writing poetry like you said you were going to! Excellent poem. You have a way with words that creates meaning deeper than you may know. I appreciate your work. Keep it up!

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