Losing The Ones I Love Poem by Sara Panicali

Losing The Ones I Love

Rating: 4.8


I feel like there's nothing
left to lose
I feel like I'm losing
the ones I love
and mean the most
I've had thoughts of ending my life
and have tried before
when my 2 boys and you came into my life
I knew there was every reason
to try and keep holding on
when I feel down
and have the thoughts
I think of my 2 kids and you
and my thoughts just disappear

I feel like there's nothing
left to lose
I feel like I'm losing
the ones I love
and mean the most
I've had thoughts of ending my life
and have tried before
but now since your not here no more
and feel like I'm losing my kids
I feel like there's nothing
left to lose
and don't see anymore reason
to try and keep holding on
when I feel down
and have the thoughts
I know I will think of my kids and you
and instead of my thoughts this time
I know I will disappear

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 03 January 2012

A dark but beautiful poem, a great write.

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Crimson Love 03 January 2012

We lose precious things in life, we can only ponder the reason why, but the heartbreak of loved ones deaths, can only scar our hearts, past the point of healing. One day the pain shall dull, if only for brief moments of numbness. You will feel whole again. Truly a magnificent poem.

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Indira Babbellapati 06 January 2012

hold! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Godwin Kavaarpuo 04 January 2012

good write. made me sad though. keep it up

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Vipins Puthooran 04 January 2012

I feel it like a sad poem, but I think it may be fictional or I hope so! ! ! ! ! But your writing is beautiful and I could relate to it; ; ; ; The pain when we lose someone who we love the most, is very worst! ! ! ! ! It's a good poem! ! ! Top rated! ! !

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Scotty Dogg 03 January 2012

Love this one! Beautiful. Me an' Saintdc luv dis 'un. Kinda sad though.9

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Saintdc Reward 03 January 2012

Pls tel me diz iz al fiction... read ur bio..its a nice poem, buh i cud feel d emotion, sad emotions, its nice buh sad....

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