Long Past Years Poem by Vizard Dhawan

Long Past Years



long past years seeing her
losing mind love occur
but I can't express myself
I feared you might not believe

ultimately heart didn't allow
seeing you, it began to low
I am tensed about my existence
as I have become your instance

but you are unable to understand
the facts revolving around my mind
you think it to be a joke
but it may prove to be a shock

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Scarlett Outlaw 21 November 2012

This is so cool - so deep and emotional - is it about someone close to you? ? ? xx

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Asif Andalib 21 November 2012

Before submitting a poem check for typographical errors. The second line is my favorite but it should be losing mind love occur instead of loosing mind love occur

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