Hydrocarbon Poem by Vizard Dhawan

Hydrocarbon

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carbon has two allotropes
one is graphite-one is diamond
you are one-you are diamond
shines for me shines by me
having you is a miracle
we are known by the names that are multiple
you and I are bonded by the bond that is triple
I am tetravalent, shows many charasteristics
but only attracted by hydrogens, that is you
sometimes, some heteroatoms disturb us
as I am strong, only bonded by you
our love story will be known for generation
I the carbon you the hydrogen thus forming hydrocarbon

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amanda Laurent 06 December 2012

A clever, witty write. I like how you spun the idea of chemistry between two people and created the perfect analogy.

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Hazel Durham 05 December 2012

So original with great lines, inspired write!

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Stevie Taite 05 December 2012

I like the idea in this one.

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Asif Andalib 04 December 2012

Interesting poem. I liked it

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