Lonely Poem by Jinal Oswal

Lonely

Rating: 4.0


I feel lonely,
When I miss your voice,
When you give me a choice.

I feel lonely,
When I fail to feel your touch,
When we don’t talk much.

I feel lonely,
When you forget the things,
When you forget to give me a phone ring.

I feel lonely,
When I walk alone,
When I am barred from your zone.

I feel lonely,
When you take my words wrong,
When you say I am just a part of a throng.

I feel lonely,
When you compare me,
When you don’t want to see me.


I feel lonely,
When you think I forgot you,
Even when you see I am blue.

I feel lonely,
When you think I don’t care,
When you think everything is fair.

I feel lonely,
When being near, you not near,
Even when I am clear.




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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sajna Kailas 08 December 2011

rhythem of the poem is fantastic, sweet sorrow of loneliness! ! ! ! loved it! ! ! ! ! !

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Rekha Mandagere 31 October 2011

You penned your loneliness but it is almost the same of majority. Nice sentiments and structure :)

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Jacqui Broad 21 October 2011

Oh, Jinal, I think many people feel lonely all the time, even in a room filled with people.. You penned your feelings well, but the hurt shined through..

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