I Will Love You Always Poem by Jinal Oswal

I Will Love You Always

Rating: 4.0


I will love you, in the springs, when everything is fresh green and new
I will love you in the summers, when the sky is clear and blue
I will love you in the autumn, when the leaves are falling down
I will love you in the rains, when the raindrops wet you through

I will love you when the sun shines hot
I will love you when the wind is blowing fast
I will love you when you sad
I will love you when you bad

I will love you when you plain
I will love you when you are in strain
I will love you when everything is said and done
I will love you with any reason, none

I will love you when you act smart
I will love you as you are in my heart

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roseann Shawiak 22 February 2016

'I will love you as you are in my heart' What a beautiful line of unconditional love! The words, I will love you is a bit too repetitious though. Maybe you can consolidate some of the lines to make it more concise. I.e. I will love you in the spring when everything is fresh, green and new, and in the summer when the sky is clear and blue. In autumn, when the leaves are falling down and rain is pouring, it's drops wetting you through. Something like that, I'm sure you can do it better. Your ideas and poetry is very good, I enjoy reading it very much. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Roseann Shawiak 22 February 2016

'I will love you as you are in my heart' What a beautiful line of unconditional love! The line I will love you is a bit too repetitious though. Maybe you can consolidate some of the lines to make it more concise. I.e. I will love you in the spring is fresh, green and new, and in the summer when the sky is clear and blue. In autumn, when the leaves are falling down and rain is pouring, it's drops wetting you through. Something like that, I'm sure you can do it better. Your ideas and poetry is very good, I enjoy reading it very much. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Dave Walker 05 March 2012

A really fantastic poem really like it. A fantastic write.

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 29 February 2012

I will love you in the autumn, When the leaves are falling down. Woow! Jinal, what a wonderful poem my friend! gently and soothing...whoever those words are going to, should be proud...keep writing my friend so we'll keep inspired.

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Alyhah Santiago 13 February 2012

awww i love this poem[3 and im kinda new here so can you tell me how to post poems

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