Jinal Oswal

Rookie - 34 Points (26/05/1989)

A Good Night Prayer - Poem by Jinal Oswal

Another day has ended
With the arrival of the night
Thank you Lord, for showing us today’s light.

Though the day
Had its own ups and downs
You made it sure
We never knelt down.

Your perspective makes us bright
Your thoughts make us right
Your arms give us strength
Your words give us courage.

Thank you Lord, for all these things,
I wish a happy and a peaceful life for all the beings.


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I was not sure whether I should share this or not... But this what I feel...
Hope you guys feel the same.. Keep writing.... :)


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Comments about A Good Night Prayer by Jinal Oswal

  • Rookie - 3 Points Sharad Juneja (4/20/2012 6:34:00 AM)

    A very sweet n beautiful verse... love to read more of u (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Prabal Dahal (12/2/2011 5:26:00 AM)

    All hail the mighty one! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 298 Points Siyabonga A Nxumalo (11/11/2011 11:59:00 AM)

    'your word gives uscourage', , , , we believe in His word and it really gives us strength...I LOVE IT, JINAL! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jenny Rose Rollan (11/11/2011 9:30:00 AM)

    this is a nice poem..I feel the sincerity :) (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,939 Points Dave Walker (11/11/2011 8:55:00 AM)

    You was right to share this. Its a very beautiful poem,
    With a really beautiful flow. A great write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sneha Walande (11/10/2011 4:27:00 AM)

    Nice prayer Jinal..thank you for sharing :) (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,542 Points Hans Vr (11/8/2011 8:55:00 AM)

    Jinal,
    This is a a fantastic prayer. Gratefulness wonderfully expressed. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jacqui Broad (11/8/2011 8:44:00 AM)

    What a nice prayer you've penned down! Hello, Jinal, I loved this! Keep writing such beautiful poems! Stay well... :) (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 607 Points Rekha Mandagere (11/8/2011 8:07:00 AM)

    It really makes me remember one of my school prayer 'Thank you for the world so sweet.......' Nice prayer! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, November 8, 2011

Poem Edited: Friday, December 9, 2011


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