A Ball Poem by Jinal Oswal

A Ball

Rating: 4.5


I want to go away
On a secret place
Where I can stand still
Where there is no race

Love is blind
Faith is like an immature child
Passion is screwed
Feelings are bruised
Emotions are misunderstood
People in the run for a livelihood
Money is everything
A person, is just another bloody thing

I think, I have been through all
Life, for me is nothing but a ball
A kick from here, a kick from there
A goal! Or a ball without air.

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jacqui Broad 24 November 2011

Jinal, this is a great poem! Many can relate, I believe. Life is a ball, yes, the earth is also round, no wonder we move in circles. The circle of life.

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Ramesh Rai 25 November 2011

think, I have been through all Life, for me is nothing but a ball A kick from here, a kick from there A goal! Or a ball without air nice and well versed. life is a ball.

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Sajna Kailas 29 November 2011

wow, considering life with a ball is an awesome thought, loved it! ! ! ! ! simlple words with complex thought! ! ! ! ! keep it up!

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Sharad Juneja 20 April 2012

really a neat work...nicely written

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Joub Kahuria 10 February 2012

i love your point of view, some times we have to come face to face with truth, a discovery of what life really is.thanks for your comment on my poem SO MUCH

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Living Experience 05 December 2011

Nicely written, very expressive and I completely get it. Thanks for your comments too, I'm glad you were able to understand them. Love N Light

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Prabal Dahal 02 December 2011

Oh my... You must have been in a horrible mood while composing this poem... Still, you have expressed what you think is the truth about life very maturely. :)

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Sarvani Pochiraju 01 December 2011

Neat work. well done.Thanks for your comment on my poem.

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