Jinal Oswal

Rookie - 25 Points (26/05/1989)

A Ball Poem by Jinal Oswal


I want to go away
On a secret place
Where I can stand still
Where there is no race

Love is blind
Faith is like an immature child
Passion is screwed
Feelings are bruised
Emotions are misunderstood
People in the run for a livelihood
Money is everything
A person, is just another bloody thing

I think, I have been through all
Life, for me is nothing but a ball
A kick from here, a kick from there
A goal! Or a ball without air.

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Submitted: Wednesday, November 23, 2011
Edited: Friday, December 09, 2011

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  • Rookie - 3 Points Sharad Juneja (4/20/2012 6:33:00 AM)

    really a neat work...nicely written (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Joub Kahuria (2/10/2012 2:08:00 AM)

    i love your point of view, some times we have to come face to face with truth, a discovery of what life really is.thanks for your comment on my poem SO MUCH (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Living Experience (12/5/2011 3:00:00 PM)

    Nicely written, very expressive and I completely get it. Thanks for your comments too, I'm glad you were able to understand them.
    Love N Light (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Prabal Dahal (12/2/2011 5:21:00 AM)

    Oh my... You must have been in a horrible mood while composing this poem... Still, you have expressed what you think is the truth about life very maturely. :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sarvani Pochiraju (12/1/2011 1:53:00 AM)

    Neat work. well done.Thanks for your comment on my poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Sajna Kailas (11/29/2011 6:29:00 AM)

    wow, considering life with a ball is an awesome thought, loved it! ! ! ! ! simlple words with complex thought! ! ! ! ! keep it up! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,232 Points Ramesh Rai (11/25/2011 4:20:00 AM)

    think, I have been through all
    Life, for me is nothing but a ball
    A kick from here, a kick from there
    A goal! Or a ball without air
    nice and well versed. life is a ball. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jacqui Broad (11/24/2011 5:18:00 AM)

    Jinal, this is a great poem! Many can relate, I believe. Life is a ball, yes, the earth is also round, no wonder we move in circles. The circle of life. (Report) Reply

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