Treasure Island

Jinal Oswal

(26/05/1989)

A Lovely Dream, A Secret Wish


I dream of an ocean
Dolphins enjoying themselves
Sharks out for hunt
All the penguins in front.

I dream of grasslands
The cows feasting on the grass
A rainbow overhead
The flowers colored in red.

I dream of a forest
The birds chirping all around in the woods
A chilling wind and the dancing leaves
All the animals trying to seize.

Enjoying my dream
I am loving all these themes
Suddenly I rise from my dream,
I don’t want to dream of you anymore
As I want you for real(Amen)


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Submitted: Friday, November 18, 2011
Edited: Friday, December 09, 2011

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  • The 4am Poet Worm (5/23/2012 2:12:00 AM)

    Hmmm a Prayer perhaps? ..... Thankful for life..for love.. and the imagination to describe all creatures great and small.... (Report) Reply

  • Prabal Dahal (12/2/2011 5:24:00 AM)

    WOW! ! great! You have meticulously described different parts of mother earth and expressed your own feelings at the same time. COOL! (Report) Reply

  • Sajna Kailas (11/29/2011 6:33:00 AM)

    yes Amen! ! nature's esteem ethnicity! God's wonderful creation! while reading this i remember my homestate Kerala is otherwise known as God's own country! nice creation loved it! (Report) Reply

  • Jacqui Broad (11/24/2011 5:25:00 AM)

    Yes, of the love of nature we can always be sure of. Dreaming about the person we fancy, brings forth many uncertainties. Sometimes dreams are better than reality. Beautiful poem... (Report) Reply

  • Siyabonga a Nxumalo (11/24/2011 12:41:00 AM)

    beautiful poem Jinal, , , it makes me think how we take nature for granted, many of don't care about it.a very good write my friend... (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (11/18/2011 6:38:00 AM)

    Beautiful and feel so much innocence running in my smile while reading this poem..It really nice and got wonderful flavor..so free and true! ! -Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

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