Jinal Oswal

Rookie - 34 Points (26/05/1989)

********** A Sunny Day ********** - Poem by Jinal Oswal

It was a sunny day,
With you shinning bright,
You being my sun,
And lighting my life with your light.
The day turns to noon,
You call me down,
I come in a hurry,
To hear you say we’re going downtown.
I hold you with a sheepish smile,
To my surprise you say we are travelling a mile,
We go riding down the roads,
Cutting the winds that flowed.
I can see you in the mirror,
You appear to me like my teddy bear,
Unsure of telling you how much I love you baby,
Making me nervous and gabby.
We returned back,
I found myself amused by your knack,
Surprised and amazed I went inside,
My eyes filled with pride.
I found the photo you developed,
Felt the love that you enveloped,
Thank you baby for this perfect day,
I wish you always be my sunny ray.

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Comments about ********** A Sunny Day ********** by Jinal Oswal

  • Veteran Poet - 1,470 Points Unwritten Soul (1/19/2015 5:48:00 AM)

    Its a great to have sunny day and sunny smile, i wish both upon ur days...thanks dear hinal for always never forget to keep in touch with me, wish you very best year in this 201..even more when it go upward... :) _Soul (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Richard McClellan (10/19/2011 1:39:00 PM)

    Very good Jinal, I really like this poem and it flowed together nicely, thought to thought. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jacqui Broad (10/13/2011 6:26:00 AM)

    I could feel your sunny day's rays on me. Thanks for sharing the sunshine... :) (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,936 Points Dave Walker (9/27/2011 6:16:00 AM)

    Like this a good poem. And a good write.
    Thankyou very much for your kind comments
    On my poems. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,524 Points Hans Vr (9/15/2011 8:36:00 AM)

    I like very much the rhyming in the poem. Very well written. Especially the last two lines are really great. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, September 2, 2011

Poem Edited: Friday, December 9, 2011


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