Little Great Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Little Great

Rating: 4.7


I observed timings
Daily in morning
And also in evening
Nonstop without dinning

It is strange
To manage
Without schedule
Like vehicle without fuel

Everything moves ahead
As if race to lead
No one wants to fall back
Even if nothing is at stake

Punctuality means everything
Discipline is another thing
Each move is to be kept in mind
Nothing is to be left out to find

This makes man little great
No hunger is felt even if not ate
The spirit keeps moral high
Always ready with wings to fly

With meager means
You can bid and win
It requires frantic effort
Enough for ship to anchor at port

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 August 2013

I observed timings Daily in morning

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Lucifera Santez 06 August 2013

a very good poem. please read some of mine. :)

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Geetha Jayakumar 07 August 2013

Enough for ship to anchor at port...Beautiful poem. Loved reading it.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 August 2013

: D Dijana blahblah4 minutes ago it's great Comment +1 I liked it

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 August 2013

Chris Jelens5 minutes ago But some rhymes are kinda dull. The ending is nice.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 August 2013

Great poem! Vong Rosavid Ek2 minutes ago such a nice flow! i liked it :)

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Hazel Durham 06 August 2013

A wonderful write about how important time is in our lives with great lines!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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